The concept is alright but you need to improve the quality of the components. The production overall actually sounds quite good and you’ve probably followed some guides to the ‘T’ to get the levels right. However, it’s really over-compressed and the samples and synths are quite 1-dimensional. If you can, swap the drums out for samples of real drums and the synths for something more basic but rich. Synths can be enhanced with ring modulators by the way, you don’t have to rely on FM synths for broad frequency spectrums
Thank you for all the tips and advises. Will follow and implement in future productions!