Tell me what is wrong with this!

I just downloaded Fl studio to make dubstep and tried to make something like virtual riot’s 10 minute drop.
Well it does not sound like the virtual riot’s one. What is wrong with this?
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Have a read through this thread;

Lots of discussion there on how to make this kind of sound.

I did not find any help from there :frowning:

You read through the whole thread and tried everything in 39mins? Impressive going.

Try watching some of the other videos of people on YouTube doing the 10min drop. Some of them have included FLP files which you can work back from.

I watched some more videos and that helped me a lot. Thank you!