Easy everyone!
Loads of you were kind enough to give me lots of feedback the first time I put a clip up of this tune, I took everything everyone said into consideration and said I would upload another clip in a few weeks or so of where it is at now 
So here it is!
[The first clip is with a quick master strip, the second is without]
https://soundcloud.com/jack-f-o/deadly-for-dsf/s-JtuCb
Allow the picture I don’t have any others atm hahaha
So if any of you have any more advice, I would be very appreciative!
Be brutal! I wanna send this out to some guys but It has to be the final, final product!
Large up!