I feel like the melody might need more variation in places but that’s personal preference and I found it pretty captivating nonetheless. Intro and sound choice is sublime, well done man! Downloaded and going on my playlist
what’s here could work as a soundtrack but i feel like something could have gone over the top. the minimalist vocal samples in there were cool but they seemed like part of the ambient bed. i could hear a full-blown vocal on this. just my .02.