Guest - If only we had known [feedback wanted]

Hello! I recently forced myself to start and finish a tune in one sitting - the result is a downtempo, dreamy kinda thing.

https://soundcloud.com/guestsounds/if-only-we-had-known

Feedback on any aspect is welcome. Was really just important for me to get a track finished without stewing over it for weeks and making it worse.

Cheers!