I love the vocals and the chord progression…mix sounds good on my monitors and even pretty punchy on my laptop speakers.Only thing I wasn’t crazy about was that saw bass lead thing you have on there it didnt seem to fit the rest of the track imo but its more of a personal preference than an actual issue.Nice work 
I really like the song. The only things that stuck out to me were a couple mixing issues. I think you should give your snare some reverb or low cut, at least until the drop, because its super loud and has a lot of presence and is kind of distracting. The vocals and melody are fucking banger, but the Kick is like non existent. Combined with that snare, if you compressed the kick and made it pop a bit more, there would be a lot better movement throughout the tune. Also, I really like your drum kit, and your choice of hit’s and effects, but the sequencing gets kind of boring. Don’t be afraid to work with many different patterns and process your sections differently to show movement and build and decay energy throughout your song. All in all, great song. Just think you should go back and do a lot of nitty gritty detail work to give it a more detailed feel. Just my opinion!
Thanks, some constructive feedback. I had to reinstall my laptop from a crash so that project is finished haha. But thanks i’ll def keep it in mind.
DAMN i just went through the same issue ;( I’ve learned to back everything up to a thumb drive. Because if my comp crashes again I’m throwing this shit out the window
The feels man…