Jurango - Feb

Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
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https://soundcloud.com/jurango/sets/january/s-JC400

first shit i’ve made in ages, still gotta do some edits + stuff, any feedback would be cool

let me know if ur feelin :slight_smile:

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i think it s a little too monotone… but honestly the last one acid lounge could sound dope with a little agressivity!

here’s mine : https://soundcloud.com/haroldtheilliez/you-like-bass if you can give feedback id appreciate it !

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i think we are from very very different circles man lol

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you asked for feedback ?

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although it’s not my thing that tune is super well produced, mixdown and shit is gd

i don’t rly know what else u could do tbh, maybe some percussion or something???

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i was only making a passing statement lolol sorry wasn’t tryin 2 be rude

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no worry man my bad !

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some fresh bits if anyone’s interested - would love to know people’s thoughts if any
thx!
https://soundcloud.com/jurango/sets/feb/s-D8PFA

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Could all be edited into one long, very interesting track - maybe two.

Maybe don’t repeat bars to fit the standard X-by-4-count song structure either.

IMHO ditch ‘Corner’ tho.

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thanks for listening man :slight_smile:

i know what you’re saying, i’m soooo bad for that - i’m quite happy with untitled #1 because it’s only track i’ve made that seems to go against that

interesting, a few friends said they liked that one - what are your thoughts on it? bit slow/repetitive/boring???

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Untitled #1 creates a fairly unique vibe, probably why it works. Maybe take some of the recurring elements and strip them down so they only happen a few times, and fly in the strongest elements from some of the other tracks or another source - pare it down until it almost stops working and then reinforce, basically.

“Corner” is DJ friendly and 4/4 so I’m prejudiced lol. Just my personal taste…I like novelty, breaks/syncopation, and change. Melodic bits are fine, rhythmically uninteresting tho (again - just to me.)

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solid comments - appreciate it !

i am defo gonna try and strip back some of the bits in untitled, try and get a bit more of a flow with the elements coming and going

was going for a bit of a repetition as a statement thing on Corner so it doesn’t rly switch up - i think you are right tho as it loses some momentum toward the end, could benefit with some spice at v least

spot on for having a listen tho thx again