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https://soundcloud.com/primerofficial/tides
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good sounds in this man, need a bit more variety as the tune progresses as it gets a bit samey.
also the bass is a bit overpowering in my headphones but that could be the headphones
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I like it, overall it’s good, maybe a bit too heavy on the reverb on the perc (maybe just reduce the size of the reverb a bit), and as riddles says it needs more variety, imo you could achieve that just by changing the guitary sounding thing a bit, instead of playing the same phrase all the time, do a little solo with it or something
cool man, really reminds me of something…
got that old Late/Phaeleh/Vaccine kinda sound,
nice one 
P.s. I see what swerver is saying about the verb, it sounds good, but a bit unnatural. Try reducing the pre-delay (2-2.5ms usually pretty good for perc), which will give a more natural sound - currently it sounds like an echo on the snare rather than the snare sitting in a nice space. That effect does give a nice breath, maybe try reducing the room size so it’s not so dense 
Loving the vibe, has got that Phaeleh sound as Urban said! But yes the reverb could of been less “there” if that makes sense. Also I think a heavier a drum rolling into the subbass would be nice, but thats subjective! Some percs could be a little lower as one rings my ears, but the track its self is a tune, and a really eerie feel. I like the composition!
@swerver @Riddles @xGannon @Urban_Fox
Thanks a bunch! So I need to ease up on the reverb, or at least make it sound more natural, and add some more variety in the melody. I already put the track out so I’ll use these notes for my next track. I wish I had spent more time on this one, but I only gave it a day. Gannon I like that idea about the drums rolling into the subbass, I’ll think about that when I make my next thing. And thanks for the Phaeleh comparison and such!
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