Looking for some creative/production tips for my track

Production
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I was wondering if anyone had some helpful criticism for this track I’m working on.

https://soundcloud.com/ordurve/christian-valentine

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Hi There

I can help I teach music production

http://www.gumtree.com.au/s-ad/lutwyche/classes/ableton-logic-x-dj-lessons-gold-coast-brisbane-sunshine-coast/1116604476

Dave