https://clyp.it/ml0e3dip Here is preview of my track its WIP… Any advices ?
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Love the track dude!! Only thing i would say is in the 3rd section, just clean up the high pitched buzz in the mix. I feel it has stuff it doesnt need on the low end, but thats just me 
If your down id love feedback on my newest track
www.soundcloud.com/nick-berkelo/done-some-things-original-mix
not a bad effort at all man, you just got to spend a bit more time on sound design and just general practice but you are going in the right direction for sure
Great Track!!!