The general vibe is being delivered - love it !
but you need to work on your mix - make your kick more punchy
The sub in the intro got clicks problems (you can eliminate them by making the attack a bit slower)
the song in general very repetitive, try to add another element & play with octaves in each section.
Good luck man
thanks for the constructive feedback, very appreciated!
I agree that the song has a definite theme, thats half the battle there.