This one deadly

1jack369 · July 9, 2015, 1:25am

https://soundcloud.com/jack-f-o/deadly

Lemme know what you think!

CreamLord · July 9, 2015, 2:09am

This yours? Sounding sick bruv

Edit - The snare/clap doesn’t sound strong enough, needs a bit more crunch kinda imo

Molzie · July 9, 2015, 2:35am

yeah, sick track.

khybot · July 9, 2015, 4:08am

dope track!

only suggestion is maybe pitch down the vocal sample or distort it somehow.

swerver · July 9, 2015, 11:24am

1jack369 · July 9, 2015, 11:47am

Large up everyone! cheers for the advice!

Jook · July 9, 2015, 11:54am

Big bruv. Work on the mix a bit and you’ve got yourself a banger

Black_Mags · July 9, 2015, 1:29pm

Into this. Sick.

swerver · July 9, 2015, 1:48pm

my thoughts after a few listens: mix needs a little work as others have pointed out, snare needs more presence, the high bit of the pulsey stringy thing (where the notes come down from high on the 16ths) is a bit repetitive for me, just too many instances of it, I reckon you need at least one more alternative to that phrase to mix it up a bit, maybe just reverse that part or something occasionally. Other than that its sounding good

tabasco · July 9, 2015, 1:49pm

Echo the above - sick tune, but the mixdown needs another look to help the snares and hats to stand out a bit more.

1jack369 · July 9, 2015, 2:39pm

Cheers guys, ill take everything into consideration, ill post another link in a few weeks or so, large up!

1jack369 · July 9, 2015, 2:45pm

Large up, agree with the high squares, it’s a single clap so thats why it may sound a bit weak, if anyone would like the stems, hit me up!

khybot · July 12, 2015, 4:06am

I’m down. PM me with the stems. I’ll do a mix down and a remix.

1jack369 · July 12, 2015, 12:55pm

your on bro

any chance of checking your shit ?

khybot · July 13, 2015, 7:30am

here’s what I’ve got so far:
https://khybot.bandcamp.com/music
all my stuff except for tracks by NightA

khybot · July 13, 2015, 6:04pm

here’s what I think, in the spirit of collaboration and artistic integrity, and terms:

The track is dope, but it could use some engineering. I’m good at mixing and mastering. You’re a sick producer and I could learn a lot from working on the track.

since this is for fun and to keep rights / terms simple:

you get all rights to the mix / master I make as long as you give me engineering credit (mix / mastering).
I can give you a separate mix file if you ever decide to get it pressed / professionally mastered (I still get engineering / mix credit though).
I get all rights to my remix as long as I give you credit for the original.

Cheyne_Taylor_Bush · July 13, 2015, 6:25pm

Big as all hell man!

SarbySarb · July 14, 2015, 6:39pm

big vibe but the mixdown needs work… greeezy still

Johnlenham · July 14, 2015, 9:54pm

Is that an SP:mc vocal sample btw?

1jack369 · July 14, 2015, 10:20pm

Large up!