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I think you should collab with @Ryan

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Do you know his name on SoundCloud?

Happy Halloween Everyone!

Thereโ€™s no coherence man. Sound design is on point, but the whole thing is just a jumbled mess tbh.

Agreed. Super clean sound design but itโ€™s just horrid and garbled.
ADHD phone speaker vibes.
Far too much going on.

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Which track are you referencing?

The one you linked, primarily, but every track youโ€™ve posted here displays the same problem; thereโ€™s no flow. One and a half minutes into that song, and youโ€™re already on like the 3rd build-up, which does not even lead to a drop, but a calm section. And the drops themselves are just completely different each time, and only like 2-3 bars long. Then another build-up and drop, then another drop in a different key for like 2 bars, then an abrupt ending.

Iโ€™m sorry if I sound harsh, but thereโ€™s literally nothing to โ€œhold onโ€ to, no recurring melody theme to remember. Thereโ€™s just way too much going on all the time, and it just ends up sounding very confusing and unfocused.

Iโ€™d recommend spending more time on developing a main melodic motif, and build the song around that. Donโ€™t be afraid of some repetition.

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This.
Most of the OG dubstep was 64ยฑ bars of repetition followed by 64 bars of slightly different repetition.
Reductive but essentially true

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Hereโ€™s is last yearโ€™s corn:

I just released this one today: