What do you guys think about ths one?

https://soundcloud.com/theprojectkid/for-sharra-and-datsik-2am-demo-mix

Drums could be punchier and like as was mentioned, the baselines aren’t the prettiest. Breakdown doesn’t make too much sense in light of rest of the tune as well. Basically the elements don’t blend well together. Try a simpler approach with fewer elements and bass-lines that De-empahsize the midrange.

Okay. Thanks for the feedback guys.