I made a tune , Dubstep ( not professional yet.)

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I’m not professional … at producing , yet…

just trying…

it would be greatful if i know what you guys think !

https://soundcloud.com/queerdisco/im-so-sickness-fucking-little-town-1

mod edit: moved to Dubs section

Honestly? It just sounds like everyother wack brostep out there.
Not saying it isn’t done well though.
Also change your name, it is not good.

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Zzzz.

Actually I referenced from old uk dub steps. :weary:
and you nick name is also not good. :slight_smile:

If you can’t take negative criticism then you shouldn’t start a whole thread asking what people think of your dubsteps.

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Also I think you need to check your old uk dubsteps again

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Nah, i like to take negative criticism.
if it is reasonable.

I think Hibbie hit the nail on the head mate.

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So it sounds like wack brostep…? (Maybr for that synth melody.) And have to change my nickname too…? What the heck is this, here …? :joy:

Or you could be more constructive in your criticism?

Exactly.
It feels like,
I have a bad day today. And im gonna screw unlikeable something over on internet.

Anywyas, thanks you all for comments.
Wheather you had bad day or not.
And i still need scenery feedback.
Well,

Tbf it does have a bit of a brostep vibe

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I say: if you’re gonna tearout, do it balls to the wall or don’t do it at all.

There is [for me] a disconnect between the melodicism and attempted ruffness. Take it one of those two directions and go for broke.

Also, needs porn sounds.

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yeah cuz of that synth bell and lead sound. i guess

Thanks. will keep that.

Yeah this is brostep, if you mean by early UK dubtep 2011 brostep i see what you mean.

bin the wois, dont use the brostep tshhhh snare.

Your alias is bait a f but use whatever you want it doesn’t really matter.

Keep making tunes you will get there.

Seriously bin the wois tho

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Just checked your SC

https://soundcloud.com/queerdisco/be-around-you

Work on this style, it’s kinda nightslugsy and has potential

the tune “Crush” has some good ideas in too

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Yeah this one is actually live you know. Like pretty ‘professional’ as far as I think you mean it.

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I prefer this one https://soundcloud.com/queerdisco/one-love-remix

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eh, that one’s terrible imo. Vocals really clash with the beat. Maybe finish up the pitch with something like Melodyne on that one.