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the tuna could do with a rude boy with the blup blup and the flap flap imo
especially the flap flap
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the tuna could do with a rude boy with the blup blup and the flap flap imo
especially the flap flap
https://soundcloud.com/unimoguri/sets/nard-ep
little tuna ep from me and dfaultuzer
@BudSpencertron crisp synths, special groove. yeah this grime stuff is starting to hit its own groove imo. even better cos of the weird ideas in the breaks. maybe look into gelling the sub and the mid more into a powerful sound that cuts straight through the groove.
@knobgoblin great bunch of sounds. Drops into some deep terrain. Feels like it could work better with even less of the sequenced structure. But by about 5 mins in, the stereo field is full so its nice. Maybe a break, where the melodies and white noise play. Those stabs that come in round 8 mins, beauty.
@faultier veryunsanitary: dirty
fulltimeinternet: well raw. dynamics are sick, all the sounds hitting straight out. original groove as well, nice to hear something different from the beats stuff. second half is so good.
@Jizz
very nice start maybe some ambient sounds could add sth i dunno children talking haha sth like that
again video game vibe would def work there too
really not much to critic takes you to a certain place def one of your better tunes 3.48 really nice melody
if you make an album or sth def put that one on
@knobgoblin
you have a certain style i like it recognizeable
all the sounds work together nicely
tune takes it time haha but i think it works cause its hypnotic
haha i like the wierd melody later on
but yeah very good very organic
maybe make a bit shorter tune like that with those nice bass stabs
@faultier
veryun - nice instrumental dig it more than some of the others. works nice maybe longer haha
fulltimeinternethomo - yeah dig that one thats the stuff i like maybe if you use an even more hollow main synth some korg preset stuff
but very nice. yeah def more of those vibes
second drop is even better maybe try to drop jsut with the wood sounds like an empty drop sometimes it sounds even tighter
pers second part hyped me more so maybe bring it earlier def so highlight of the tune
oh my god Tuna still lives
yeah man would be cool to have you back
entries from cyclopian and myself already, send yours in, will post later today
CLIQUELOPIAN
https://soundcloud.com/cyclopianarchitects/whileyousleep
BLUDSPENCERTRON
https://soundcloud.com/unimoguri/fanta-wip
FLOATIER
ill see what i can do. i havent been producing much since i joined the military ;/
@BudSpencertron really digging the first half of this, the 2nd part kinda looses its heaviness with that high note pattern tho and sounds a bit too āthinnedā out. This kinda stuff is right up my alley though, been loving playing these kinds of tune on the radio here.
@faultier loving everything except that growly bit in there, idk it just sounds too chunky for the mix. Maybe thin out the bottom end of it a little bit so its even more of just a texture to compliment the rest of the sounds? Im not sure
https://soundcloud.com/unimoguri/crystal-ninja
changed it alot dunno if is better or worse haha
k feedback
@cyclopian
really like the intro
very dark ambient i like it like film music for a good horror indi movie or sth haha
not much to say really well put together i would shit my pants if it would start to play in a scene
@faultier
maybe just take out tiny bit of the peak in the start but you can keep this rawness just a tiny eq
all layers nice so far yeah i agree the growls isnt needed imho or lower it even more like just sth rumbling on the bottom
the vocal sample the short one works but without it its more like a idm tune but its not bad
maybe give the drums a more underwater filter at some point to add some changes to them cause the pattern is nice
guys iām getting mixed signals here should i lowpass or hipass that growl then?
tweedback:
@cyclopian good shit, sound design is on point, mixdown appropriately gritty, inspiring use of the stereo range too, makes me realise i should noodle with that more, canāt critique it really⦠the penis shaped feces people also add a nice touch
@BudSpencertron strong grime tuna again, though that reversed metallic synth sounds like its a bit out of tune with the rest? wasnt feeling the eastern sounding vocal sample in the first version so good thing you toned it down imo
also i feel there could be another element in the second part after the break, not sure how to explain it but it feels to me like its not quite matching the energy levels of the first part?
ah yeah i agree could be bit of i tried to work by spektrum haah cause some sounds are hard to pin point like hoovers and reeces but i think i like the ending though its like idm or sth haha i wanted it to be different but i see your point its like taking the hype away rather than add something harder
i think both could work tbh lower or higher as cyclopian said or make it more of a neurofunk thingy haha like maybe stabs but with bandpass or sth on it? dubdelay just hints of it or sth
i send you wip too
@cyclopian @hubb @knobgoblin will post tunas in a few hours, send yours in if you got any
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Jizzmatazz
https://soundcloud.com/relka/unread/s-Az2A9
Budhisatva
https://soundcloud.com/unimoguri/mog-walk-wip
Flutist
https://soundcloud.com/dfaultuzer/relka-misty-hills-refix/s-uTShd
@BudSpencertron thats one groovy walk. feel like the kicks that come in add a special groove to the thing. very nice break. crazy though, so they get surrounded and arrested while taking a walk? jeez really not much to say about this one bro, wanna hear how u finished it
@faultier yes mate. took the nicest stem and looped it, thats my favourite loop as well. whatever those sounds are that come in round 2:30 mins, theyre very nice. sounds like detuned strings? percussion kick off nice, would love to hear it develop into something fully moving, as in a clicky snare or something to really get things going. maybe move around the strings too, octaveplay and that
thanks for the feedback lol yeah i wasnt thinking like that just liked both samples
was sick the whole week so i try to get to the feedback tonight or tomorrow
get well soon bro
ok, apologies, i dont have any tuna this week, only got one from Jizzman so i guess we skip this one, also going on holidays for a week so probably wonāt have anything next week either tbh we probably shouldnt skip two weeks in a row so if someone wants to be the tunamaster next week?
now some feedback:
@Jizz really feeling the very raw feel of this one, kinda reminds me of very early slugabed stuff. feeling that melody in the intro, maybe it could make a comeback halfway through as a breakdown?
liking the wonky vibes better than on your previous tunas, doesnt feel as disjointed to me rhythm wise, although i feel the beats could be a bit more interesting, maybe layering some foley sounds, using reverb on some hits, these kinda things.
@BudSpencertron tearout meets swamp 81 vibes on this, wondering how this would have been received in like 2010?
not sure about the big metallic hits, feel like thereās some unwanted hiss in the higher frequencies, maybe just my headphones, aside from that canāt fault it really, sounds pretty much finished to me