(possibly important note: after a year or so of not having monitors because reasons, making and listening to tunas on headphones, i got monitors for my production machine, my feedback mixdown wise should be more reliable from now on, or not, maybe give me a few weeks to get used to monitors again )
@Jizz hard to critique something that's so extremely experimental tbh, digging the sound design tho. probably firmly into personal taste territory but i feel it could work better if the groove was tighter, like keep the messed up and harsh tones but structure it in a way that makes sense groove-wise, think emptyset's demiurge album, really experimental and weird but still something you can bop your head to
@cyclopian liking this, not sure if finished or WIP, but wouldnt mind a 320 once you're done. hope it's a WIP tho, give this baby a proper ending, could also easily be 1-2min longer. aside from that not much i'd change, the upper end frequencies on the kick on 1 sounded very harsh when i listened earlier on headphones, but it doesnt sound so bad on my monitors now, so i'm not sure. actually maybe just a volume thing? or maybe some sort of transient shaper misbehaving, like it sort of pops in a vaguely unpleasant way? after several listens idk anymore, dont mind my ramblings. all in all, my main criticism is that "six shot" was a much superior title imo.
@Samuel_L_Damnson really digging that main synth melody, not sure what to say about this one, mixdown sounds fine to me, appreciate all the little bleepy incidentals too, not sure what to critique tbh, sounds really finished to me, unless you want to extend it into a second part, then i'd suggest switching that synth melody around in the second section
@BudSpencertron C2 4: really feeling this, actually wouldnt mind stems to try and give it a remix. it sounds to me like that reese is way too loud compared to other elements, was especially noticeable on headphones. maybe you could lowpass it a bit too so it doesnt fight for space with the rest in the mid-frequencies? another thing is i'm not sure about the snare, feels like it could cut through the mix more?
Take This Out: not sure about the accapellas, feel what you have here is sick enough to stand on its own tbh, also not 100% certain but it seems to me the vocals are slightly out of tune with the music. i would ditch the accapellas and fill the blanks with more of that choir-like thingy imho
oh and, back to what i was saying re: getting monitors again, re-listening to my own recent tunas, everything sounds like the bass is either too loud or quite muddy or both? is it just me not being used to my monitors yet or have my subs been sounding like shit and none of you traitors told me? i thought we waz friends