rob collab: feels to me like the kick could be weightier, idk, maybe i would try with a different kick altogether actually, but maybe thats just me, personal opinion and all that
also seconding the comment that it could use another element on top, maybe some dub techno stabs could do, like take it firmly in rhythm & sound territory?
purr: i like the pads, although it feels a bit monotone-ish after a while, i reckon you can definitely add some other melodic element, even just something sparse. not too sure about the snare, i’d try to layer it with some other sound to make it a bit crunchier, that or maybe put it through some subtle reverb to give it more character feels kinda dry as it, also agreed you could work on the drums, add incidentals here and there to make it less samey
unknown t: oh shit, sick sound design on that horn sounding bass in the intro, i’m all ears if you want to say how you made this one. wasn’t expecting it to go all acid techno, interesting progression, listening on headphones so maybe thats the problem, but i feel like you could have more going in the low end once it goes acid, i’d say you could try to somehow re-use that intro bass later
hallo2: always difficult to critique straight weird ambient pieces like that, feeling it tho, big up the ominous dystopian vibes. is it samples or synths?
also re: your new boss, just make sure you keep the jizz stained dress handy for the subsequent judiciary committee hearing and i reckon you’ll be fine